~ The Space Between ~ We lived in the space between intoxicating indigo and the palest blush of dawn wisps of imagery floating behind gently closed eyes I watched as we laughed we explored new things we were close. So close to each other until we werenβt suddenly I am alone standing on the thin ice between dream and reality pale blush grows unrelentingly bright eyes close tightly not wanting to yield reality advances and I step inward the ice splintering with each step until the dream becomes a web of distorted pictures I can no longer make out the face from my dreams who tasted indigo with me? was it someone I knew? it could have been you but I may never know the ice is giving out reality is unrelenting and eyelids flutter against the inevitable they open and the space between dream and reality is no more but where does that leave me? my body belonging to one my soul to the other and you, somewhere in between. Β© Dahlia Ramone: August 22, 2020 * Whit's fur ye'll no go by ye (what's meant to happen will happen) * This was written for Blogophilia Topic: "It Could Have Been You" Prompts: (1) Incorporate ice (2) Use a Scottish Slang Word or Expression
Reality has always been thin ice, most of us just don’t notice. 8 points Earthling
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Yeah, I’m not really a fan of it, lol. Thanks, Martian Dude π
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SO beautiful. This was stunning and heart ripping in all the right places. Wow. Love your words.
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Thanks, Christine. Your feedback always means so much to me π
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Lovely piece. Was it a dream? Or just a wanting?
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Thank you. And isn’t that what a dream is, a subconscious wanting? π€
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Well done, Poet. That waking from a better reality where love is pure and unblemished is both a bitter and wondrous pill!
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Aye, and one from which there is no cure. Thank you, fellow Poet π
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Love it, Dollface! Bittersweet, yet perfectly expressed.
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Thanks, dollface π
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This is beautiful. Sad, but beautiful (Lissa)
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Oh good, it did show my name XD
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ππ
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Thanks, Lissa. And I was excited to see you writing! Please keep it up π
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Reality is indeed very harsh and unrelenting
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Yeah, I’m not always a fan π
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